My Life And Soul [A Poem From Fiona]

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    My Life And Soul [A Poem From Fiona]

    Post by Secret on Fri Apr 10, 2009 10:12 pm

    Have you wished you be dead?
    I have.. And because of this,
    I see no more.
    All I see is tears and the souls of friends and family screaming at me in my mind.
    It kills me itself,
    I want no more.
    My life is horrible as it is.
    The soft kisses of the men around me,
    I flutter but stiffen to the sadness it creates.
    A dieing soul is all I am.
    Have you wished you could be dead?
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    Re: My Life And Soul [A Poem From Fiona]

    Post by Saruno Tazunara Kazura on Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:20 pm

    *Sniffled* Tis a great poem fiona-chan.. ^~^


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    Re: My Life And Soul [A Poem From Fiona]

    Post by Itachi-Uchiha on Sat Apr 11, 2009 4:36 am

    It's great but one thing.

    see no more.
    All I see is tears and the souls of friends and family screaming at me in my mind.
    you said you dont see!
    then you say you see. kinda went against yourself there
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